Poise

I'm really not sure about the black and white contrast... mainly because I feel it takes some of the life away from things. It does have a classic look to it, but I'm not sure if I'm fond of it myself.

Perhaps you could do some selective colouring... or maybe put it in colour? Is there anything wrong with the colour version?

I like the depth of field anyway, and how you have positioned the main subject matter in the centre. You've filled the frame out well.